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0 posted 2000-12-11 06:03 PM




the bruises i feel will heal
i will just stand alone in the nice wind
on your vaccant street
and let it take all the memories away

as i stand outside your house that hates me
i step back inside to remind you that rain feels good
but the past is gone
you say you cant love me

so i will forget you with the first drop of rain that welcomes me away
I will let the clouds cry for me,
after it all, i see the cold breeze feels better than your lips ever did

i am 2000 miles away from the nearest friend
and youll die before you give me your hand

i hate you for taking so much of everything
but it cant hurt me, because you dont know what you have
because if you did you would have never dropped me

so i will stand outside your small house in the rain
2000 miles away from home
laugh, and let the clouds cry for me
you never knew what you wanted
but now i am starting to figure out what i will always have

i will never be this foolish again
or maybe by saying that i am just getting a head start
the sky opens up
i close up
and you sit inside
and we just wont talk after all
and no one will ever grasp
how much we contrast


"The biggest ocean can not stop a man from drowning" - Paul Watley

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1 posted 2000-12-12 01:45 PM


Great poem. I feel the pain all too well. I loved this lines.

I will let the clouds cry for me,
after it all, i see the cold breeze feels better than your lips ever did

Great work.

Ronil (The sweet sound of summer sends serenity through my soul searching for that evermore solitude.)



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