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I am The Evil
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I am The Evil |
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G. A. Webb Member
since 2000-01-21
Posts 441Stanton, California, USA |
I am the evil That lurks within I am the evil Of all your sin I am the evil Of what you do I am the evil That lives in you I am the evil Of all your pain I am the evil Driving you insane I am the evil That comes with night I am the evil That brings your fright I am the evil That hates you so I am the evil Thought you should know I am the evil Hear what I've said I am the evil That wants you dead G. A. WEBB Regret not that which you have done, Rather that which you haven't |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
WOW! Sounds alot like my voices I hear!  *kidding!*I really liked this one though. It read smoothly and flowed right along. ( right into my nightmares)  Great Read, Mags No person is worth your tears, and the only one that is ...... will never make you cry |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Hehe! Cool... Got me thinking about a movie I saw yesterday which was really scarry. And about my test later today That's a great description for it! Take Care! |
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G. A. Webb Member
since 2000-01-21
Posts 441Stanton, California, USA |
Dark_kisses_Within: Thank you!  I don't know where this one came from, but had fun writing it anyways...hehe. A "nightmare" is a good description for it. Thanks again, I'm glad you enjoyed it. LM: Thank you too! The devil made me do it!!! LOL! Just kidding! But I've gotta admit, this is a rather "dark" piece. I'm glad you liked it, thanks again. G Regret not that which you have done, Rather that which you haven't |
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dragonpoe Senior Member
since 2000-11-12
Posts 608Palm Bay, Florida |
I enjoyed it. Sinister and left wide open for each reader to find in it what they want to.. The best kind of psychopathic feel. "I am the Evil.." what is that evil? Guilt? Anger? Lust? A demon? See what I mean, the options or imaginings are endless. Well done. With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free.. dragonpoe |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
This is good definatly echoes the voices in my head lol LOVE ELMO <3 |
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G. A. Webb Member
since 2000-01-21
Posts 441Stanton, California, USA |
dragonpoe: Vary astute observation. When I thought of the evil within myself and found that it had many faces. Thank you for seeing that. qtpieelmo: LOL… I suppose we all have those voices inside our heads. Thanks! G Regret not that which you have done, Rather that which you haven't |
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StarrGazer Senior Member
since 2000-03-05
Posts 679Texas |
WOW! I really liked this poem ... it is packed full of emotion and easy to relate to ... my brain was getting ahead of reading the poem and formulated this last line "I am you" for me ... |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
I agree with all the above and more, there is that little evil in all of us, the secret is not to let it rear it's ugly head too often.. Great writing my friend.. Isis *I believe every time you put your words to paper, you change. Each feeling is set free, and you may follow.....* ~Isis~~Sovereign of the Spirit. |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Holy ****ake Mushrooms, GA!!! What a piece of writing!! Really great stuff here. I'm glad I didn't miss it. Hardrock |
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G. A. Webb Member
since 2000-01-21
Posts 441Stanton, California, USA |
StarrGazer: Thank you, I'm glad you liked it. Ya know, I had actually thought about ending it like that but thought it would have been a bit redundant after having said, "I am the evil, That lives in you". So, the last line just popped into my head which gives one a clod slap in the face. Thanks again! Isis: Hello old friend. I agree with you, although one can have some rather interesting times when it dose come out. Sometimes you have to let it out in littet spirts so that it doesn't build inside and then explode. As long as the "evil" is controled and meant in the spirit of mischief and not hurting someone, it's ok...lol! Gee, where did that come from...hehe! Thanks Lisa. Hardrock: Thanks bud! I'm glad you liked it. I kinda think it's a pritty cool piece too, if I do say so my self. Thanks again and ROCK ON DUDE!!! G Regret not that which you have done, Rather that which you haven't |
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firejerm Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 217Springfield, OH, good ol USA |
Anything involving the word "evil" in the title attracts my attention. I believe this kicked major ass...right now it's what I'm about. Glad I stopped in to read this one! Jerm "Those little slices of death, how I loathe them." -Edgar Allen Poe |
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