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carolinadreams
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since 2000-07-20
Posts 142


0 posted 2000-12-09 04:06 AM



i'm a young man
but i'm not a dumb man
i've been through what most would call
i've laughed off and how can i move
hey, i've got this problem
i always talk about me
if you don't relate
i am truly SORRY
but i'm still a young man
i've been told never again
i chanced a unified dream
kill me if you must
slander was their king
such blatent reverse of time tested souls
i'm a young man
why slap my kno.....
i'm a new man
(profanity edited) you without a chance
i'm a young person
and i made a call
explatives enhance the day
can she laugh and prove
maybe an ego can be listed
and just maybe we can be

Peace, Love, and happiness forever
J.L Koehler



Carolina - Intentionally mispelling swearwords doesn't negate the fact that they are such. I'm sure you're aware they are not tolerated in the forums.

Severn



[This message has been edited by Severn (edited 12-09-2000).]

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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico
1 posted 2000-12-09 01:35 PM


I thought the poem was great!......I did, however see that you wrote a bad word in it which is not permitted. The moderators will correct that soon enough, just a little warning before time.
Anyway great poem!



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!


Zyell
Member
since 2000-07-28
Posts 121
USA
2 posted 2000-12-09 05:20 PM


well now this was very interesting....

waiting to see what's next!

*S*
Z

"I am an abstract of Circles"

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