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Dark Poetry #2

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ChainedAngel
Member

since 2000-01-07

Posts 55
tx

0 posted 2000-12-08 11:28 PM

    For a breath of ecstasy,
       Give all you have been or could be.
       And for your heart's still delight,
       Bright as the stars that light the night.

       If your too tired to play the game,
       Tired of hearing someone scream your name,
       Sick of being the star of the show,
       Make yourself just say no.

       For when you have become so vague,
       That you cannot tell night from day,
       And you look in the mirror and all you see,
       Is this transparent image... of me.

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There is a dream inside a dream. I'm wide awake the more I sleep. You'll understand when I'm dead

- B. Warner

[This message has been edited by ChainedAngel (edited 12-09-2000).]

dragonpoe
Senior Member

since 2000-11-12

Posts 608
Palm Bay, Florida

1 posted 2000-12-09 01:41 AM

Very good.

With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free..
dragonpoe

Verve
Member

since 1999-06-23

Posts 348
Singapore

2 posted 2000-12-09 12:30 PM

Hi Angel,

I thoroughly enjoyed this read.
Great work u have done here.

~verve

[This message has been edited by Verve (edited 12-09-2000).]

ChainedAngel
Member

since 2000-01-07

Posts 55
tx

3 posted 2000-12-09 06:29 PM

Thanks dragonpoe and verve. Your comments are greatly appreciated.

There is a dream inside a dream. I'm wide awake the more I sleep. You'll understand when I'm dead

- B. Warner

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