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!!! Member
since 2000-08-12
Posts 137VA (U.S.A) |
Life passes us by Each waking moment, each day. We must sieze the time. -"!!!" [This message has been edited by !!! (edited 12-08-2000).] |
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dragonpoe Senior Member
since 2000-11-12
Posts 608Palm Bay, Florida |
how true, how true... Enjoyed the read. With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free.. dragonpoe |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
So tru so tru.......i really liked this one. I often think about this......wonderful job.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Zyell Member
since 2000-07-28
Posts 121USA |
how very true, sometimes at the end of the day, I lie in bed and think about how it's one day closer to the end....kind of morbid, but it makes me realize, you do need to seize each moment. *S* Z "I am an abstract of Circles" |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Amazing the thought you can get in three lines... liking it...  K |
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!!! Member
since 2000-08-12
Posts 137VA (U.S.A) |
Dragonpoe: Thanx for reading, and im glad you enjoyed my haiku. Dopey Dope: Thanx for reading, and responding as well. I, myself, should probaly think more of this subject, though. Zyell: Thanx, as well, for reading and responding. But as for the end of the day, with all that happens in my life now, i usually am just thankful its the end of the day. But ya know, it is kinda sad when to realize that it IS one day closer to the end. |
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!!! Member
since 2000-08-12
Posts 137VA (U.S.A) |
Severn: Man, was it ever tough for me to squeeze that whole, big thought in only three lines(or 12 syllables). But, im glad i did, and im also glad you enjoyed my haiku. |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Really? Well...you see, I just know that haikus can be difficult - and aren't often done well. However, this is actually a senryu - which shares the same format as a haiku - but differs in content as the traditional topic of a haiku is always about some aspect of nature. K |
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!!! Member
since 2000-08-12
Posts 137VA (U.S.A) |
Now, see, i didnt know that. Thankx for clearing that up. I had heard senryu before, but assumed it was the same thing. Ya learn something new everyday. Thanx a bundle!! |
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