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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2000-12-05 07:57 PM


Do you know what it feels like, when no one really cares?
As I sit here just waiting, for an answer ,as I stare
Two choices I have had, it seems, to bathe or go to bed
And at this point I'm getting numb and either do I dread.
I'm almost feeling warm tonight, its very strange, I think.
Maybe it's that age thing flashing neon, 'til I'm pink.
From frosty tip of nose to hands that remain all gloved tonight,
I'm almost beyond feeling cold, with darkness in my sight.

I've called, received and yet here still, the Wynter's chill has grown.
Maybe when tomorrow comes, I won't be all alone
To fight this cold that overcomes, and steals my breath away.
Or maybe they will find me gone, no color, just death gray.

~Wynter



"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II


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catalinamoon
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since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone
1 posted 2000-12-05 10:51 PM


Nah, they will find you shining brightly, warming up the coldness of the world.
Peace
Sandra

Victoria
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2 posted 2000-12-06 10:33 AM


Hasnt that guy fixed that thermastat yet ha..
what kind of a town do you live in anyway..dont they take pity on women that are freezing to death..

               ~Victoria~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)


nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
3 posted 2000-12-06 02:01 PM


Sandra..not too sure I have been freezing for 3 days here...was wondering if anyone would care enough about it if they found a corpse here..*s...the plumber couldn't  decide what's wrong and that "almost gone" husband of mine would rather spend the nights warmly with someone else.....so here I stayed cold and waiting...wondering


~V~...well if all else fails you go out and buy a few heaters in the meantime...so I am slowly beginning to warm up..even my cat won't leave the bed...and she's got plenty of fur..am smiling now..don't ask me why huggz

~~Wynter


"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II


dragonpoe
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since 2000-11-12
Posts 608
Palm Bay, Florida
4 posted 2000-12-06 03:25 PM


gloomy and chilly.
well said.
Sorry to hear you're this cold, here I am in Florida complaining its not cold enough!


With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free..
dragonpoe

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
5 posted 2000-12-07 09:33 PM


hmmmmm my mom lives in Florida I could always warm up there..*s

~~Wynter..thanks, dp


"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II


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