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taramw
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since 2000-06-08
Posts 738


0 posted 2000-12-05 09:01 AM


i walked
down
the street
called "Despair"
looked down
at my feet
beating time
to the blackness
beneath.
looked up
to the sky
devoid
of everything
except
my own
reflection.

~ Tara ~
5th Dec. 2000


soul dying... heart crying.



© Copyright 2000 Tara - All Rights Reserved
JOY 14
Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419
Wisconsin USA
1 posted 2000-12-05 11:06 AM


Tara,
short and sweet despair. I've often felt exactly this way. Enjoyed your words

Joy

Hardrock
Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948
New Hampshire, USA
2 posted 2000-12-05 12:12 PM


Tara....excellent.  You captured it all in so few words.  Very well done.  Hardrock
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