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skyler
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since 2000-12-04
Posts 5


0 posted 2000-12-04 03:43 PM



pushin me so hard
the pen goes through
and into the desk below.
i cover my self
in wax
to feel the way
your skin must,
gouge out my eyes
to see the way
you see me,
piss in my mouth
to taste the way
you kiss me,

i love you,

and your every punch you sank deep into me
sending me to the hospital
for blood transfusions,
i miss thoes days.
riding in your car
cursing me with every word
and being left alone weepin
milk driping from my eyes to
my mouth
tasted from the tit of
mother.
Tasted the way i felt
when you were
around.


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Dark_kisses_Within
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since 2000-03-21
Posts 680
Kansas
1 posted 2000-12-04 04:22 PM


HOLY!!!


No person is worth your tears, and the only one that is ...... will never make you cry


Xeonox
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since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764
CA, USA
2 posted 2000-12-05 12:32 PM


Their is something big going on here. I like the way you use your imagination.  

Ronil (The sweet sound of summer sends serenity through my soul searching for that evermore solitude.)



Dopey Dope
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San Juan, Puerto Rico
3 posted 2000-12-08 03:33 PM


I thought this was one of the best poems i've read in passions. So creative and deep. I loved this and look forward to seeing more of you.



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!


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