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qtpieelmo
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since 2000-07-04
Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY

0 posted 2000-12-03 07:38 PM


GOING GOING GONE

It hurts, It aches,
where my heart used to rest.
It was ripped, it was torn,
right out of my chest.
I saw it coming all along.
I thought we'd be forever,
now it's forever gone.
How do I live,
now that we're through?
My phone won't ring, my heart won't beat.
If only I had knew.
I wouldn't let it get to this,
wouldn't let myself fall in love.
Wouldn't have wasted another kiss,
to only get the shove.
Can I let myself get close again?
Let myself hurt, when another ends?
How much can my heart take?
How many times can it break?
Is it even worth it?
Another one will go wrong.
Should I keep my heart locked up,
so it won't see another be,
going, going, gone?

<3
ELMO


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Dark_kisses_Within
Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680
Kansas
1 posted 2000-12-04 02:40 AM


Yeah breaking up can be difficult! But if it ended so badly ,then most likely that person wasnt the one for you.  Keep your head held high ...... the "one" might be watching over your shoulder!

Peace and smiles,
DkW


No person is worth your tears, and the only one that is ...... will never make you cry


dragonpoe
Senior Member
since 2000-11-12
Posts 608
Palm Bay, Florida
2 posted 2000-12-04 11:26 AM


Sad.. A wounded heart shows here.
Never believe you can't heal, and even if ten more goings get gone, there is bound to be the one to stay, eventually.

With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free..
dragonpoe

firecrakker
Member
since 2000-10-20
Posts 235
Virginia
3 posted 2000-12-04 01:26 PM


Elmo!  

First of all, I really like the tempo of this piece.. and YES!!! It is worth it...no matter how many times your heart is broken..

Excellent write!

Sheila

qtpieelmo
Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY
4 posted 2000-12-09 05:30 PM


Thanx guys Yea me & this guy are back together now for the time being, he just wants some space lol we live 5 hours apart already anyway   thanx for replying LOVE ELMO <3
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