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Gman
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since 2000-11-16
Posts 2


0 posted 2000-12-02 03:24 PM


The gates of hell
Open up wide
For the stories I tell
Hidden in lies

Pain and despair
Destruction and dismay
I’ve seen it there
I live it each day

Take my hand
Please, hold on tight
I'll do what I can
Not to lose you tonight

Walk my streets
Talk with me
Hear my heart beat
Then drop to your knee

The louder it becomes
Entrapping every thought
As your soul succumbs
To what can’t be bought

The love in me
Is filled with your pain
Can’t you see
It’s all in vain

So now you know
It’s all in here
You can go
But live in fear



© Copyright 2000 Gman - All Rights Reserved
Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
1 posted 2000-12-02 05:41 PM


Dark perfection, omens and all.  Really enjoyed this dark peek into the inner self..
Isis

*I believe every time you put your words to paper, you change. Each feeling is set free, and you may follow.....*
~Isis~~Sovereign of the Spirit.

Deranger
Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 498
Somewhere, between here and there
2 posted 2000-12-03 12:46 PM


Maybe...add a good dark beat to it, and you have one hell of a gothrock song...kudios...


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taramw
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since 2000-06-08
Posts 738

3 posted 2000-12-03 08:22 AM


What an ending!!!  Loved it  

~ Tara ~


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Verve
Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 348
Singapore
4 posted 2000-12-03 12:18 PM



Great work! Simply love the really dark ring in this one ...

~verve

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