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carolinadreams
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since 2000-07-20
Posts 142


0 posted 2000-12-01 02:30 AM


i've made it to here
how strange
gone looking, and here i am again
ya see, i've seen it all before
i've seen all the doors
you take one and feel
you take none

a man lies dying
can't commit
a woman tries trying
can't commit

the scent of a newly touched pussy
can't keep him from dying
can't commit
it smells of buying
lita can't figure it

dave found his soul
august told him no

what could become of something that feels
dave backed out, and kept a keel
august tried and even cried
dave smirked with a new tide

as the waters went away dave had nothing to say
so the season would tend to cure
dave had trouble loving anymore

he went through life
again tasted hell
he felt the strife
again tasted hell

august seemed so far away
he just managed to hear her say
she sighed in disbelief
and he cried

she promised so much
he awaited her touch
he said he could manage
but missed her menage

she must've been some sort of a god
because water turned into wine


NO!!!! She IS an ANGEL
whether dark or light depends on the life
and who's sure that has mine

OOPS WE MISSED MOST EVERYTHING

Peace, Love, and Happiness `FOREVER'
JLK


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Xeonox
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since 2000-04-01
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1 posted 2000-12-01 11:25 AM


WOW. Great poem. Very interesting and very true.

Ronil (The sweet sound of summer sends serenity through my soul searching for that evermore solitude.)



Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
2 posted 2000-12-02 05:49 PM


Brilliant , love the way your mind ticks hon.
But even we Gods, Godesses or Angels fall.  The secret is to understand them, be mighty, and forgive them... Trust them again?  Well that is another matter...
Loved this as I do all your stuff hon
Isis

*I believe every time you put your words to paper, you change. Each feeling is set free, and you may follow.....*
~Isis~~Sovereign of the Spirit.

Deranger
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since 2000-05-10
Posts 498
Somewhere, between here and there
3 posted 2000-12-03 03:58 PM


Let's see...Success, Possession, Neccessity...and love...yes love. How fiting that we may rise to the stars, only to be struck down by a stray arrow, fired from some accursed sweetheart bow.

Yeah, it's love...

Spreading insanity, one post at a time

"Way back in eighty-seven, where we bust rockstands till we get to heaven"



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