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Victoria
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0 posted 2000-11-30 03:47 PM


moonbeams glisten in the night
when all is sound to sleep
snowflakes silently tango
outside your window
dreams begin to creep

shadows peek behind the curtain
while lips of wind whispers good night
cyan eyes roam over your body
upon your skin they embark

the fever of the night surrounds
rising with cerulean tides
waves of desire bound
drowning in the potion of night

crystal goblet on the night stand
lonesome bubbles of champagne
harmonizing to the firelight
on dance floor of sapphire flames

if only the night could never end
on the wallpaper of discreet
in the mirror of a dream
reflections of smoke and ashes
laying naked in moonbeams



A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)


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nakdthoughts
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1 posted 2000-11-30 06:35 PM


lonesome bubbles of champagne

hmmmmmm..and wow to that  last stanza..loved it...

~Wynter


"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



Irish Rose
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2 posted 2000-11-30 07:30 PM


cyan eyes roam over your body"

Liked it much, loved this line....

What is that you express in your eyes? It seems to me more than all the words I have read in my life.

Walt Whitman



Jannel
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3 posted 2000-11-30 11:28 PM


i love the different blues. you always use such pretty images...

jann elizabeth

firejerm
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4 posted 2000-12-01 01:13 AM


This is going to sound very unprofessional, and hardly literary, but HUBBA HUBBA...you really know how to turn the heat up in here and I love it!  Good work!

Jeremy

"Those little slices of death, how I loathe them."
-Edgar Allen Poe

Victoria
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5 posted 2000-12-01 04:16 PM


wynter..i thought you would like that line the best ha..

jann..i try to add color images to my poetry if possible..glad you enjoyed

kathleen..thank you for visiting kathleen


jeremy..so glad you enjoyed Jeremy..thanks for peeking in..

                    ~Victoria~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)


catalinamoon
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6 posted 2000-12-01 09:07 PM


Yes, yes!! Exactly! Love this.
Sandra

Verve
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7 posted 2000-12-02 12:34 PM



Yeah ... I do like this one a lot ... Simply sensual ...
*sighs*

~Verve

Victoria
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8 posted 2000-12-02 01:19 PM


Sandra and Verve..thank you for reading...so glad you both liked.. HUGS

                  ~Victoria~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)


taramw
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9 posted 2000-12-03 08:07 AM


Awesome!!!    You capture things so well Victoria!

~ Tara ~

"A poem should not mean, but be" - Archibald MacLeish


Victoria
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10 posted 2000-12-03 05:57 PM


thank you tara..i try ha..glad you like hon

                      ~Victoria~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)


Kethry
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11 posted 2000-12-04 04:44 PM


Victoria,
sounds like someone's got the blues and what deep blues they are. Well done!
Write on
Kethry


Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant - Thoreau



Victoria
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12 posted 2000-12-04 05:21 PM


i love blues haa..pinks jades lavenders ha...thank you so much my aussie friend..

              ~Victoria~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)


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