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Verve
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since 1999-06-23
Posts 348
Singapore

0 posted 2000-11-29 12:27 PM





Many moons have waned and gone.
Many chapters and passings it has mourned.
Yet your tenderness it shall not blight.
My dear angel, I do miss thee tonight.

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This is a repost from the open forums. Juz wanna share this lil' verse ...

~Verve


© Copyright 2000 Regina Ng C. L. - All Rights Reserved
PureM
Junior Member
since 2000-11-23
Posts 22
London, UK
1 posted 2000-11-29 02:51 PM


oh yeah!  I can dig poems like this at the moment!    thanks Verve.

Matt

Tiersdin
Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364
east coast
2 posted 2000-11-29 06:07 PM




I'm still trying to figure out why this poem has gone virtually unnoticed. I loved it, says so much with so little...

-Tier

firecrakker
Member
since 2000-10-20
Posts 235
Virginia
3 posted 2000-11-30 12:44 PM


Short and to the point.. and what a poignant point it makes. I loved this!

Sheila

Verve
Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 348
Singapore
4 posted 2000-11-30 01:44 PM



Hi Everyone ...

Thank you for your kind comments. Really glad that u all liked it.
=)

~verve

Victoria
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since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869

5 posted 2000-11-30 03:57 PM


enjoyed reading..thanks for posting again

                  ~Victoria~



A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)


LM
Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585

6 posted 2000-12-01 06:15 AM


Oh yes...
Short and sweet, great job!
Take Care!

"Most girls want a man with the mean green
Don't wanna dance if he can't be
Everything that I dream up
A man that understands real love"


fractal007
Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958

7 posted 2000-12-01 05:46 PM


Great poem!  You've managed to convey such emotion in just these four lines!  
taramw
Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738

8 posted 2000-12-03 08:05 AM


*sigh*  Beautiful  

~ Tara ~


"A poem should not mean, but be" - Archibald MacLeish


Scarlet Lady
Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 242
Midwest
9 posted 2000-12-03 07:56 PM


VERY ROMANTIC.....the kind of poem that makes you begin to drift as you read the last words, and ponder who it is your dreaming of!  Wonderful!
Jannel
Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 492
Muncie, IN, USA
10 posted 2000-12-03 08:30 PM


hmmm. i like.  

jann elizabeth

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