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Suzanne Arlene
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since 2000-10-09
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Ontario, Canada

0 posted 2000-11-28 12:39 PM


Walls that hold you prisoner
Letting nothing of yourself to chance
Walls made of concrete and stone
Made me take a second glance

I have hidden in walls that high
Know how deceiving it's height can be
Do i really want to scale it
Is he worth that much to me

Is he worth  my fear of falling
Not to sure what i may actually find
locked behind the hidden doors
that are locked inside his mind

Oh God please give me answers
To the uncertainty that has grown
Are they his walls i fear so much
Or  is it the fear of my own.


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serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

1 posted 2000-11-28 01:23 PM


Suzanne? I adore this message, in fact? I think I need to share this one with a friend.
Well done, and I thank you.

Suzanne Arlene
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since 2000-10-09
Posts 377
Ontario, Canada
2 posted 2000-11-28 07:30 PM


Thank you serenity.I am honored that you would like to share it with someone.You have made my day. take care Suzanne
Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
3 posted 2000-11-28 08:25 PM




You wrote my heart! Thank you for this.

Dark_kisses_Within
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since 2000-03-21
Posts 680
Kansas
4 posted 2000-11-28 09:26 PM


Very well written!    I know how ya feel also.  But in my case its my walls I am scared of.  

Great piece,
DkW


No person is worth your tears, and the only one that is ...... will never make you cry


Dream Chaser
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since 2000-11-21
Posts 32
South Carolina
5 posted 2000-11-28 11:51 PM


Suzanne, my love  has walls too...walls so high that I'll never be able to scale them..."Walls made of concrete and stone"...these walls of his will never shatter.  I am forever locked outside of his mind.  Your poem was very touching to me.  I could relate to its message.  Great write!

Angel

Suzanne Arlene
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since 2000-10-09
Posts 377
Ontario, Canada
6 posted 2000-11-29 07:01 AM


Miss Devine and dark Kisses We must have the same heart.I think the most sensetive people are hidden behind walls.
Dream chaser
the price is high but" Is he worth that much" If so girl you better get your climbin gear.lol   take care  and thank you for all your responses.   Suzanne

Hardrock
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since 2000-02-14
Posts 948
New Hampshire, USA
7 posted 2000-12-12 11:33 PM


Suzanne...I was reading back through the archives and found this one of yours.  I have never been disappointed in any of your poems...and this one was no exception.  If I understand anything about my life, it's those walls.  Well done.  Hardrock
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