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The Last Chapter... |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas 
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I have fought long and hard For the life I have today Hitting many dead end roads Seeing no light on my way Yet the little things in life Never meant that much to me Today I have them all Still missing something, you see During my long journey I forgot to look around To notice the rainbow colors Or the friends I have found To smell the bed of roses To watch the sky so blue Passing up my chance for love Not even noticing you Yet there you sat watching Wanting me to look your way Never making a sound Passing along the day Pondering is all I do now For a new path you have took Being selfish got me nowhere As I silently close the book No person is worth your tears, and the only one that is ...... will never make you cry |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
DKW, how sad, it's true though sometimes we don't know what we've got till it's gone. Excellent write. Be well Kethry Why do yesterdays remain and todays pass by ...unnoticed? Rex E. Alford |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Mags...So many missed opportunities for love, for friendship, for good things in life, because we hesitated, procrastinated...All of us have some of these, some have more than others. You have written it so well here. Hardrock |
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DJLI Member
since 2000-06-21
Posts 237TN, USA |
Wonderful writting. Sometimes I forget that I can just kick back and enjoy the wonder of the moment. P.L.U.R. |
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DJLI Member
since 2000-06-21
Posts 237TN, USA |
Wonderful writting. Sometimes I forget that I can just kick back and enjoy the wonder of the moment. P.L.U.R. |
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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
Wow! It seems that tonight(26th of November), all the poetry I've read has touched me in really painful places, lol. This one hit me hard! It reminds me of my years in middle school. While I was there, I thought it was awful. But now, looking back, I think it was kinda fun. If wonderful things in life are this fleeting, then what is heaven like? lol |
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Dream Chaser Junior Member
since 2000-11-21
Posts 32South Carolina |
DKW...sometimes in this busy world we don't stop and take the time to "smell the roses" and we miss so much. Beautifully written. Thanks for remindng me to stop sometimes. Angel |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
I forgot to look around To notice the rainbow colors Or the friends I have found To smell the bed of roses To watch the sky so blue It's never too late to stop and smell the roses! Take care! "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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firejerm Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 217Springfield, OH, good ol USA |
Shoot me now! When I stop to smell the roses, they are but yellow ones. They are safe it seems.  Great poetry, yet seemingly misdirected, maybe I'm off course here, and maybe I'm just tired  Miss you!Jeremy "Those little slices of death, how I loathe them." -Edgar Allen Poe |
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