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PureM
Junior Member
since 2000-11-23
Posts 22
London, UK

0 posted 2000-11-25 03:53 PM


Everytime I think of you,
It brings tears to my eyes,
Just the other morning,
We were together, watching the sunrise.

Holding each other tightly,
Talking and laughing, maybe a kiss or two,
Forever in my heart,
Is where I'll keep you

Even though we are now apart,
And your heart I no longer touch,
Your soul is still the reason,
My love light shines so much.

Never forget...

M

© Copyright 2000 PureM - All Rights Reserved
firecrakker
Member
since 2000-10-20
Posts 235
Virginia
1 posted 2000-11-25 11:18 PM


PureM,

Oh WOW!!! Every girl should have the privilege of hearing these words. Very nice!  

Sheila

taramw
Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738

2 posted 2000-11-26 04:48 AM


*sigh*

Beautiful piece Matt   Take care.

~ Tara ~


"A poem should not mean, but be" - Archibald MacLeish


Caz
Member
since 2000-09-13
Posts 133
ConcepciĆ³n, Chile
3 posted 2000-11-26 12:44 PM


Woow man, this was a really good poem!
Woooow  
Your friend,
Caz

It's been raining since you left me.

Kandi
Member
since 2000-06-14
Posts 354
North of Hell
4 posted 2000-11-26 01:16 PM


Ya know, every girl that reads this is going to wish it was written about her! VERY well done, I love it ~ especially the last lines...I am a sucker for powerful closings in poems    You're good at this romantic stuff hun - keep it up ok? Anyways, there is much to say but I'll save it for my next novel-long email lol. Keep writing and all the best always
Love ya lots
Kristin


~*Things you see the way you see them will never be seen again*~

~Won't you come and hold my hand?
This world has taken me as far as it can...
w

PureM
Junior Member
since 2000-11-23
Posts 22
London, UK
5 posted 2000-11-27 06:17 AM


Thanks Sheila, Tara, Caz and Kristin!  I'm flattered!

I just wish the girl I wrote it for felt the same way.

Love
Matt

Ginners
Member
since 2000-07-22
Posts 339
Mullica Hill, New Jersey
6 posted 2000-11-27 08:58 AM


this is a really good poem, it almost made me cry it reminds me of me and my ex we watched the sunrise on the beach one morning and the next he dumped me this is very good thanx for posting it

"I'll build a wall if we can keep them on the other side"---NIN
"There is no always forever, just this"-the cure

dragonpoe
Senior Member
since 2000-11-12
Posts 608
Palm Bay, Florida
7 posted 2000-11-27 11:24 AM


Soft and sweet. Very nice  

With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free..
dragonpoe

Verve
Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 348
Singapore
8 posted 2000-11-28 01:38 AM


Hi Matt ..

This is so sweet ... Very lovely words ...

~verve

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