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taramw
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since 2000-06-08
Posts 738


0 posted 2000-11-24 07:09 AM


Hmm... just a silly thing I wrote early November... not all that poetic really... was just havin' some fun  


MARS

i'm kinda worried
about this
and that
and me.

fire dancing
in my mind
in my heart
in my eyes.

wondering what's
happening
thinking too much
of floating
in the sky.

touching the stars
looking down
hmm...
maybe from
mars.




~ Tara ~
8th Nov. 2000
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"A poem should not mean, but be" - Archibald MacLeish

[This message has been edited by taramw (edited 11-24-2000).]

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Hardrock
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since 2000-02-14
Posts 948
New Hampshire, USA
1 posted 2000-11-25 01:01 PM


Tara..."Mind therapy" I call it....when you just let your mind float free, without forcing any thoughts or "thinking too much".  Most of us do it, but most of us don't write about it.  I'm glad you did, and that you shared it with us.  Hardrock
G. A. Webb
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since 2000-01-21
Posts 441
Stanton, California, USA
2 posted 2000-11-25 01:41 PM


This is an interestingly light piece, I liked it allot. With all of the heavy emotions being shared in this forum, it's nice to see something on the lighter side. Thanks for sharing.  

G

Regret not that which you have done,
Rather that which you haven't


firecrakker
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since 2000-10-20
Posts 235
Virginia
3 posted 2000-11-25 11:26 PM


Pshawwww!! You do well when having fun!! I really enjoyed this whimsical piece of work.    Thank you for sharing it!

Sheila

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4 posted 2000-11-26 02:41 PM


This was great.......i was just looking at mars the other day.....so beautiful!



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!


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