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firecrakker
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since 2000-10-20
Posts 235
Virginia

0 posted 2000-11-24 12:14 PM



Gentle breaking wind
lift my fragmented soul
Inhale the ashes of my spirit
Exhale to places unknown
Away from garrulous seasons of doubt
shallow, teasing gale
that stirs the melodies of my heart
then slices with agony's wail
Please! Sweet Tempest!! Take me now!
Leave no piece in your wake
Sacrifice to oblivions sighs
No more cherished heart to forsake.

Sheila

11/23/00




Life is a journey.. not a destination.. - unknown



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EagleOne
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since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829
Between a laugh and a tear...
1 posted 2000-11-24 02:06 AM


~Please! Sweet Tempest!! Take me now!~ loved that line, mind you I liked the rest of it too.  


"The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest"
~ My Angel.


Dream Chaser
Junior Member
since 2000-11-21
Posts 32
South Carolina
2 posted 2000-11-24 10:16 AM


As I read I could picture the wind picking up the fragmented pieces of my soul and blowing them to the four corners of the earth.  Very good.  I enjoyed it very much.  

Angel

fractal007
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since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958

3 posted 2000-11-24 03:50 PM


I love this one!  I too like wind.  Check out my poem entitled(no surprise, lol) Wind.  

This one was short and sweet.  It was sort of reminiscent of Shelly's Ode to the West Wind.  Good work.

Hardrock
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since 2000-02-14
Posts 948
New Hampshire, USA
4 posted 2000-11-25 12:57 PM


Shelia...I DO enjoy your poetry so much.  This one had such good vibes...that's the only way I could describe it.  Hardrock
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