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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
This is a two-part poem I'm working on. It's based on a wierd dream I had once. This is the first part. The reason that the second part is long in coming is because I'm still working out the rhyming and stuff for the last 8 verses. It's a very difficult one, because I plan to try to have the rhyming scheme a b b a b a a b b a a b a b b a Just for the sake of having a wierd format, because my dream was rather wierd, but also seemed to have a bit of a story. But let me just say, when the second part comes, it's rather anti-climactic. A girl and her mother once lived beside The beach of this the dream within my rest. The mother and daughter were both distress'd Because the husband was not at their side. But then one day he return'd from the west. "Daddy's home!" he call'd, with arms open wide. He was now home, where he could now abide. But soon he had to go back to the west. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
I'm not sure what to say on this one LOL Sounds like a song and I'll give a real comment when I see part 2... Weird stuff you dream hon LOL Isis *I believe every time you put your words to paper, you change. Each feeling is set free, and you may follow.....* ~Isis~~Sovereign of the Spirit. |
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