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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
HE RUNS from these arms stained with imperfections SCAREY things that threaten to engulf & overtake him HE runs from my smile pretending what he sees behind adoring eyes does not exist He ponders ghosts & their shadows as they cling with painful clarity to his own soul Ugliness mirrored unwittingly by me Therefore, He punishes us both, & runs whenever I am near... -R.T.{Tiersdin} |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
I really like this  It reads well... good imagery Take care!~ Tara ~ "A poem should not mean, but be" - Archibald MacLeish |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This is gripping.... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Dream Chaser Junior Member
since 2000-11-21
Posts 32South Carolina |
I haven't been in this very long but I really enjoyed your writing. Thanks! Angel |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Thanks for commenting, Tara, Sunshine, and Dream chaser... it's not one of my best, but one I like alot... -Tier |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Thanks for commenting, Tara, Sunshine, and Dream chaser... it's not one of my best, but one I like alot... -Tier |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I think this is great. I liked this one a lot!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
And what would you consider your best, Tier? I love the strength of yr words here. Mike |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Ah another one that runs! Enjoyed your version of a familiar scenario. |
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