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Tiersdin
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since 11-17-2000
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east coast


0 posted 11-19-2000 02:05 PM       View Profile for Tiersdin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Tiersdin

My lover,
shrouded in darkness
painted streaks of hate
across porcelain
perfection
He wills me to
look at him
boring holes
through my heart
I cared not to see
pain caused by
bitter words
glaring from once
loving eyes, now
plotting against me
The door to freedom
is blocked by tall,
immovable anger
He waits with sadistic
pleasure, eyes gleaming
knowing I will try...

-R.T.
{Tiersdin}
2/00

© Copyright 2000 R.T. Webster-Mosby - All Rights Reserved
firecrakker
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since 10-20-2000
Posts 238
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1 posted 11-19-2000 02:10 PM       View Profile for firecrakker   Email firecrakker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for firecrakker

Wow! This one draws you in, I'll say that. Excellent write, here, and I loved the title. It fits well.

Sheila
Jannel
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since 01-18-2000
Posts 498
Muncie, IN, USA


2 posted 11-19-2000 03:21 PM       View Profile for Jannel   Email Jannel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jannel

this is very beautiful, and especially hanunting to me since i am incredibly clastrophobic. chills. i really liked the "streaks of hate across porcelain." nice work

jann elizabeth
Michael
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since 08-13-99
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3 posted 11-19-2000 09:02 PM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

Tiersdin,

This was deep with emotion - almost paralyzing...  I could feel the dilemma you faced.  Excellent poetry.


Michael
taramw
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4 posted 11-19-2000 09:25 PM       View Profile for taramw   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for taramw

Woah! Yeah... draws you in, most definately!    Nicely written.  Take care.
~ Tara ~

"A poem should not mean, but be" - Archibald MacLeish
Broken Wings
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since 03-18-2000
Posts 156
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5 posted 11-19-2000 10:15 PM       View Profile for Broken Wings   Email Broken Wings   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Broken Wings

Try and keep Trying...Excelent Work!

take care


"As you learn and grow, you will realize the greater the pain, the greater the growth."
-IYANLA VANZANT

OLIAS
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since 06-20-2000
Posts 1031
Pearl city Iowa


6 posted 11-19-2000 10:41 PM       View Profile for OLIAS   Email OLIAS   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for OLIAS

I too love the line "Streaks of hate across porcelain perfection", wonderful imagery, and intense emotion. Excellent work.

Regards,
Olias
Dark Angel
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7 posted 11-20-2000 01:43 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Tiersden,
The title drew me in and the poem swallowed me up, I like very much  
a very intense poem  

Maree

"If my words could blanket the skies
and fill every corner and crevice of
this earth, still this won't be enough"
"Maree Russo"
nakdthoughts
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since 10-29-2000
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Between the Lines


8 posted 11-20-2000 05:13 AM       View Profile for nakdthoughts   Email nakdthoughts   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for nakdthoughts

He wills me to
look at him
boring holes
through my heart
I cared not to see
pain caused by
bitter words
glaring from once
loving eyes, now
plotting against me

darn...is all I can say

~Wynter


"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II


JamesMichael
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since 11-16-1999
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA


9 posted 11-21-2000 01:25 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Very nice...James
Tiersdin
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since 11-17-2000
Posts 2476
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10 posted 11-21-2000 10:51 AM       View Profile for Tiersdin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Tiersdin

Thanks all for your comments. I'm smiling from ear to ear! I'm planning to enjoy more of your works as well!

*hugs*
-Tier
Dream Chaser
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since 11-21-2000
Posts 32
South Carolina


11 posted 11-22-2000 11:37 AM       View Profile for Dream Chaser   Email Dream Chaser   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dream Chaser

Wow!  Great poem.  The situation is much like my own.  The title is very fitting.  Some people get "sadistic pleasure" from tormenting others with their words.  Great!  Thanks for touching my heart.

Angel
bsquirrel
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since 01-03-2000
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12 posted 09-16-2002 06:17 PM       View Profile for bsquirrel   Email bsquirrel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bsquirrel

Thought I'd peruse the words of a friend.
More verse edged in pain and hope.

Mike
 
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