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ThyWizard
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since 2000-08-06
Posts 56
Chambersburg, PA, USA

0 posted 2000-11-18 02:00 AM


Her loving eyes shine like a light,
Her beautiful face shines twice as bright.
As I run my fingers through her soft, sweet, hair,
My lonely heart lights up like a flare.
To kiss her head while she’s sleeping,
To touch her face and hear her breathing.
To hold her tight and know she’s there,
To kiss her lips and let her know I care.
To rub her back while she’s in my arms,
To hear her laugh and feel her charms.
Just the chance to look deep in her eyes,
And hold her close whenever she cries.
I could never hurt her, I’m after all who try,
She knows I love her to the day I die.
Just the chance to do any of these things,
Shows all the happiness that she brings.
These are the ways I express my love,
And I’ll continue til I go above.
She knows it all, she knows it’s true,
There’s nothing for her that I wouldn’t do.
To kiss her neck and know she’s hot,
And know almost every ticklish spot.
She laughs and giggles and calls me a brat,
But her cute little dimples are worth all of that.
The smiles and happiness that she can bring,
Let’s the Just To feeling, forever cling



" If who i am is what i have and what i have is lost, then who am I? " - unknown


Tryps


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Dark_kisses_Within
Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680
Kansas
1 posted 2000-11-18 02:28 AM


WOW!!  I was gasping for air with this one    So sweet!!  Lucky lady ya have there.  Great poem!!

DkW


No person is worth your tears, and the only one that is ...... will never make you cry


taramw
Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738

2 posted 2000-11-19 12:58 PM


Terrific!    Yeah, I agree with DkW, lucky lady indeed!
~ Tara ~


"A poem should not mean, but be" - Archibald MacLeish

Broken Wings
Member
since 2000-03-18
Posts 157
Miami, FL.
3 posted 2000-11-19 11:06 PM


my oh my! just goes to show that love can also be a beautiful thing.

best wishes to you both!



"As you learn and grow, you will realize the greater the pain, the greater the growth."
-IYANLA VANZANT


ThyWizard
Member
since 2000-08-06
Posts 56
Chambersburg, PA, USA
4 posted 2000-11-20 07:40 PM


Thank you all for the comments, thought sadly this poem was written a while ago...we've been broken up since last Februrary...but i still mean every word of it.  tahnks again for the great comments

" If who i am is what i have and what i have is lost, then who am I? " - unknown


Tryps


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