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LM
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since 2000-08-03
Posts 585


0 posted 2000-11-17 10:14 AM


Forever Love

I want to hold you in my arms
And melt in your embrace,
To lay my head upon your chest
And kiss your neck and face,
To find a place inside your heart
To place my heart into.
I'd be so thankfull all my life
If you could love me too.
Forever love is love 'till death
And then in skies so blue
My love will wait forever more
Untill you get a clue.


  
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"Most girls want a man with the mean green
Don't wanna dance if he can't be
Everything that I dream up
A man that understands real love"



[This message has been edited by LM (edited 11-17-2000).]

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Dark_kisses_Within
Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680
Kansas
1 posted 2000-11-18 02:37 AM


Great one!!  Give him time (men are a little slow)  *kidding of course*  
Nice expressions here
DkW


No person is worth your tears, and the only one that is ...... will never make you cry


taramw
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since 2000-06-08
Posts 738

2 posted 2000-11-19 01:01 AM


Nicely written    
~ Tara ~


"A poem should not mean, but be" - Archibald MacLeish

Broken Wings
Member
since 2000-03-18
Posts 157
Miami, FL.
3 posted 2000-11-19 10:58 PM


sometimes the clues we give out, that for us seem obvious, aren't obvious for others. good luck! good work!

take care


"As you learn and grow, you will realize the greater the pain, the greater the growth."
-IYANLA VANZANT


catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone
4 posted 2000-11-20 10:04 PM


You said it, girl. Very nicely done.
Sandra

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