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Dark_kisses_Within
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since 2000-03-21
Posts 680
Kansas

0 posted 2000-11-17 01:45 AM


This was written awhile ago but I thought it would be good for the ones getting over a lost relationship...... Blessed be to you all!

There's so many things I wish I would have changed
But time was not on our side
Our love didnt even get to blossom
Before it silently died

Yet the sun shines bright upon us
And the wind blows yet again
Maybe someday we'll find true love
And the game of love we can win

So hold your head up high
Stand up straight and tall
Smile as you enter a new day
For cupid will make the call

For love takes support
And the knowledge that you care
Without even knowing
It makes it hard to bare

We all learn from our mistakes
And from the people in our days
We tend to say good-bye
To the people along the way

Yet another will enter
And we will soon forget
The people from our past
As we ponder and sit

But if you are the lucky one
They will not forget you
Remembering the good times
And the time they spent with you


No person is worth your tears, and the only one that is ...... will never make you cry


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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
1 posted 2000-11-17 07:08 AM


I enjoyed this, but do you think you really can ever forget the people from your past, aren't they  and all experiences  what make you, you?

just being thoughtful in my nakedness today

sighing~

~Wynter


"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



Dark_kisses_Within
Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680
Kansas
2 posted 2000-11-17 08:54 AM


Well yes I agree to a point.  You can't always remember everyone during your lifetime of experiences  Thats what I meant by "if your lucky" part, meaning hopefully you had made a great impact on their life and they cant forget, no matter how much it hurts to think about you.  
Thanx for your comment though  
DkW  
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No person is worth your tears, and the only one that is ...... will never make you cry



[This message has been edited by Dark_kisses_Within (edited 11-17-2000).]

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