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mopey
Junior Member
since 2000-11-14
Posts 12


0 posted 2000-11-14 08:57 PM



I feel like writing
But i have nothing to write
The urge to hurt myself
I have to fight
Fight for control
and for my sanity
So much pain
So much vanity
I wish to be perfect
The American dream
But all the frustration
is making me screem
screem in my mind
screem in my heart
All this anger
tears me apart
I cry in the night
when no one can see
'cause I'm all I think of
All I know is me
So just let me screem
And let me fight
leave me to cry
into the night

© Copyright 2000 heather - All Rights Reserved
Dark_kisses_Within
Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680
Kansas
1 posted 2000-11-15 09:33 AM


I cant believe this has NO replies!  This is an excellent poem that shows so much pain.  You have written how I once felt in my past.  Sometimes it can be painful just to look into a mirror.  But things do get better, believe me, I KNOW!

Great work hon,
DkW


No person is worth your tears, and the only one that is ...... will never make you cry


Dark_kisses_Within
Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680
Kansas
2 posted 2000-11-15 09:45 AM


Ohhhhhhhhhhhh (silly me)  Welcome to Dark Passions       

No person is worth your tears, and the only one that is ...... will never make you cry


SpitFire
Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396

3 posted 2000-11-15 11:48 AM


~Hey you,...Welcome here! This was an aching read,...but one that displays an open and honest expression from you. So well done. Hang in there and keep writing. *Peace your way.
stoned'
Junior Member
since 2000-10-23
Posts 14

4 posted 2000-11-15 01:33 PM


Wow great first post..even i feel like that a lotta times ..but can never write it down..u took the words right outta mouth!It really is sad Hug*
Suzanne Arlene
Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 377
Ontario, Canada
5 posted 2000-11-15 02:14 PM


I hope this is not how you feel inside because there is alot of hurt there.Great poem   Suzanne
Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico
6 posted 2000-11-15 02:37 PM


WELCOME TO PASSIONS!
I really felt this one. It hit the spot in my heart. I have felt like that so many lonely nights. Oh well, these are things that happen for the inevitable well being of the individual's power to cope.
Much luck....peace your way.



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!


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