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mojar
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since 1999-11-09
Posts 169
granbury, texas, usa

0 posted 2000-11-14 11:46 AM


waterlillies

you are the music that moves my soul,
the strings that cry out my name.
the softness of the ivory keys,
so delicately played within my heart.
tempted by the chorus of the love i feel,
i long to hold you and caress you,
as a musician to the violin.
preciously drifting through the night air,
i feel your presence radiate through me.
the earth stands still at your sound,
clouds part and give way to you.
the ocean gently moves with the rhythm,
that is evoked by the music of your love.
i stand in awe watching the world lay down at your feet,
bowing gracefully to accept your beauty.
you darling, are the music of my heart.
the waterlillies dance beneath the starlit skies,
as the moon serenades you.
and i too, dance with you in my arms.

mojar


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MiseryDivine
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since 2000-06-13
Posts 114
Chicago! en america...oh lala! i wish i lived in England.....(sigh)
1 posted 2000-11-14 11:08 PM


oh my god...this was so beautiful....it was so cute...awww....if this was written for someone in mind..you should definetly give it to them...i loved this piece! great job!
MiSeRyDivine

firecrakker
Member
since 2000-10-20
Posts 235
Virginia
2 posted 2000-11-15 06:34 AM


wow.. I'd like to be on the receiving end of a poem like this!  ...very nice.

Sheila

dragonpoe
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since 2000-11-12
Posts 608
Palm Bay, Florida
3 posted 2000-11-15 09:11 AM


I have to agree with the two comments above mine. This is very warm, charming, lovingly sweet and wonderful. Words to melt the heart.


With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free..
dragonpoe

mojar
Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 169
granbury, texas, usa
4 posted 2000-11-15 06:30 PM


thank you for such nice comments, it is very much appreciated.  mojar
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
5 posted 2000-11-19 02:14 AM


"The waterlillies dance beneath the starlit skies,
as the moon serenades you."
My favorite lines...James

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