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Broken_Heart Member
since 2000-07-24
Posts 57Netherlands |
Is this Reality? I feel the rain Dripping on my face Yet it isn't real As the rain turns into tears I am living in a dead world Yet it feels I died inside Not able to love the things around You were only a dream No... With you I was awake I could see clearly What was reality The world is all around me Yet now I know That you were my world You made it real... Darkness upholds Light as much as Holiness downs the Evil within... |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
What if's There are many for many people. I guess we invent the answers in our heads...or ignore the possibility of an answer completely. 'You were only a dream No... With you I was awake' This is a feeling I knew quite well. Well done, BH...you've written the hurt well. K The wind shifts like this: Like a human without illusions... This is how the wind shifts: Like a human, heavy and heavy, Who does not care. W.S |
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Allysa 
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
wow. this really describes how I feel. this is so awesome! keep it up!! I can't see at all. Even if I could it would all be gray, put your picture on my wall, it reminds me that it's not so bad, it's not so bad. |
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SwEeTnSeXy18 Member
since 2000-09-18
Posts 247nc |
Broken Heart: I used to feel this way after my mom passed away when i was 12. I know the light is hard to see right now but one day in time it will peel through. Im sorry for your loss....hope it gets better soon  Ps. I think you were talking about a guy (boyfriend) in this poem though wern't you? Either way it hurts to lose. ~Lisa~ ~in order to gain, you have to lose~ |
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Broken_Heart Member
since 2000-07-24
Posts 57Netherlands |
Dear SwEeTnSeXy18, This poem is not dedicated to my boyfriend as I have a girlfriend ! Yet it is dedicated to the loss of a former love...I'm sorry to hear about your mom, as losing someone precious as your mother is the worst that can happen... Good luck to you sincerely, Broken_Heart Darkness upholds Light as much as Holiness downs the Evil within... |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
I am living in a dead world Yet it feels I died inside Not able to love the things around these lines really stood out for me BH enjoyed the read, I look forward to reading more of your work Maree "If my words could blanket the skies and fill every corner and crevice of this earth, still this wouldn't be enough" "Maree Russo" |
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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
Cool poem. I really like the questions about perception and reality, and the way you've addressed them here. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Great poem........i know exactly how this feels......it's a very depressing thing to feel though......damn do i hate it. Hope you're coping better than I.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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