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Mend my torn heart
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Mend my torn heart |
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just_another_fe Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 483MICHIGAN 
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STORY BEHIND THE POEM: I WAS TALKING TO THIS GUY JEREL (THE SWEETEST GUY I'VE EVER MET IN MY LIFE). IT SEEMED LIKE A "SEX" RELATIONSHIP CUZ EVERYTIME WE WERE TOGETHER THATS WHAT ENDED UP HAPPENING. ONE DAY HE JUST STOPPED CALLING. FEW WEEKS AFTER I TALKED TO HIM ON THE PHONE...HE TOLD ME HE STOPPED CALLING BECAUSE HE DIDN'T WANT ME TO GET TO ATTACHED AND THEN END UP HURTING ME. I ASK "WHY DIDNT YOU JUST SAY YOU WANTED TO SLOW THINGS DOWN" HE SAID IT WOULD HAVE BEEN TO HARD BECAUSE HE STILL WANTED TO TALK TO ME. HE FIGURED IF HE JUST STOPPED CALLIN INSTEAD OF TELLING ME HOW HE FELT THEN MAYBE ONE DAY IF WE MET BACK UP WE COULD KICK IT AGAIN. SINCE WE TALKED ON THE PHONE I CANT STOP THINKIN BOUT HIM..I MISS HIM A LOT! IT WAS LIKE A DREAM. I SHOULD HAVE KNOWN TO GOOD TO BE TRUE. IT JUST FELT SO GOOD TO LAUGH AT THE SILLY THINGS YOU WOULD DO. YOU MADE ME SMILE, WHEN OTHER GUYS JUST MADE ME CRY. I ENJOYED SO MUCH TO BE WITH YOU, SEEMS LIKE THE TIME JUST FLEW BY. WHY DID YOU HAVE TO GO AND LEAVE ME HERE ALONE? I WANTED YOU TO STAY HERE TOGETHER WE COULD HAVE GROWN. I MISS YOU SO MUCH YOUR VOICE ON THE PHONE. NOW WHEN I PICK UP THE RECIEVER WHAT USE TO BE YOUR VOICE IS NOW AN EMPTY DIAL TONE. I MISS YOUR SOFT SKIN AND YOUR GENTLE HAND. THE WAY YOU FELT AGAINST ME TAKING ME TO SOME UNKNOWN LAND. I'M SURE YOU DON'T BELIEVE I CRY OVER YOU. I BET YOU DIDN'T KNOW THAT I FELT THIS WAY, I'M SURE YOU DON'T KNOW HOW MUCH I WANNA BE WITH YOU. SUPRISE, NEITHER DID I TILL JUST THE OTHER DAY. I KNOW YOU DIDN'T MEAN TO HURT ME, THE PAIN YOU CAUSED WASN'T INTENDED. I JUST WISH YOU WOULD CALL ME, SO MY TORN HEART COULD BE MENDED. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
This reminds me of a period in my life when I thought if I opened up and revealed who I was inside the other person wouldn't like me...so I kept my feelings to myself.. and today I have no fear of opening up and revealing myself to the woman I am with and sometimes they don't seem to care who I am...seems like I can never get it right...but I like who I am...I enjoy being open...so as Ricky Nelson said you can't please everyone...you just got to please yourself..and then find the one that likes who you are...and keeps coming after you...wanting more and more...James |
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Mick Hawkes Member
since 2000-10-26
Posts 90Tees-side , England |
Did you send him the poem?.. i can feel the hurt and heartbreak inside you when i read your poem , i hope all turns out well in the end but if not then dust your self down , look life in the eye and move on , the loss would be greater to him.. you will find what you seek only if you keep looking so never give up , as long as you know you gave it your all .... Mick A smile a day helps you work , rest & play. |
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Lady Lost Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 470 |
I feel your pain. But I have learned that sometimes hearing their voice only makes you hurt more. ...beth |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Same here. . . sometimes, you just have to let go. . . and move on. . . ---------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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just_another_fe Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 483MICHIGAN |
HE CALLED LAST NIGHT!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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Mick Hawkes Member
since 2000-10-26
Posts 90Tees-side , England |
AND?..!!!... i hope you find the happiness you seek and deserve... keep us posted...lol all the best Mick |
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Broken Wings Member
since 2000-03-18
Posts 157Miami, FL. |
oh girl, i hope the call didn't bring more pain. maybe only time and reflection can mend a broken heart. good luck! take care "As you learn and grow, you will realize the greater the pain, the greater the growth." -IYANLA VANZANT |
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