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Screaming Clear |
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firejerm Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 217Springfield, OH, good ol USA |
Tonight a full moon lurks The sky is screaming clear A breeze cool blows peaceful Yet there is still something I fear. My blood which now slithers From this battered heart Torn from your emotional claws Prepared to fall apart. Somwhere deep and frightening I can feel it all again This blood-stained velvet From a love which ends. Recalling a yesterday past And your words so soft Now just cast away To a place time forgot. Your absence tears at my flesh Leaving me bitter and sore Going on without you An option considered no more. Headlights vanish far away Like the memories you bequeath Or like that old log in the yard Never seeing what's underneath. I gaze up to the heavens If there is such a place I thought I had been there When I first saw your face. Tonight the moon lurking Wears an evil scowl Somewhere in the dark shadows A desperate cyote howls. The blood runs free now From my heart once true You left without cause My reward for loving you? Jeremy T. Sellers 11/12/00 8:30 PM "Those little slices of death, how I loathe them." -Edgar Allen Poe |
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MiseryDivine Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 114Chicago! en america...oh lala! i wish i lived in England.....(sigh) |
hmmm....confusing...but i liked it... MiSeRyDivine |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
I understand..... and yes I agree here. Give it time though, everything takes some getting use too. Great words!! DkW No person is worth your tears, and the only one that is ...... will never make you cry |
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firecrakker Member
since 2000-10-20
Posts 235Virginia |
Tempestuous joy is a just reward for the battered and scarred heart that is released from the fear of the past. Very nice work, Jeremy. Sheila |
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Jannel Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 492Muncie, IN, USA |
awesome title. and loved the word "slithered" jann elizabeth If you can feel that staying human is worthwhile, even when it can't have any result whatever, you've beaten them. -1984 |
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Trisha4_u Junior Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 28 |
Jeremy... your talent amazes me constantly. Maybe she is awe struck in the beams of your headlights? Look towards the sunshine my friend! Trisha |
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