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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA 
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Darkness arrives upon this day, For my wish you decided not to obey, From sky let the fire rain, Thoughts of death may fill your brain, Father Ocean rises from his palace, Uses water, as is faithful malice, Mistakes of the past you did not heed, When you chose to follow greed, Facing the end you plead once more, Wanting something you cannot control. Ronil (The sweet sound of summer sends serenity through my soul searching for that evermore solitude.) |
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MiseryDivine Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 114Chicago! en america...oh lala! i wish i lived in England.....(sigh) |
oooo....i like the way you put this....very kewls...great work...much love MiSeRyDivine~ |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
Thanks for the response.  Ronil (The sweet sound of summer sends serenity through my soul searching for that evermore solitude.) |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
Very GOOD poem!! I loved it. Very dark and revealing. keep up the work, DkW No person is worth your tears, and the only one that is ...... will never make you cry |
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dragonpoe Senior Member
since 2000-11-12
Posts 608Palm Bay, Florida |
My take on this is about the inevitable destruction of man, due to his greed and carelessness. I like the lines about Father Ocean, got a good image there. With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free.. dragonpoe |
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