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Dark Poetry #2

My view on many things

Poetboy96
Junior Member

since 2000-11-05

Posts 12

0 posted 2000-11-11 11:24 PM

Perhaps all knowledge,

has been lost.

A fallen victium,

to Pandora's box.

Rewritten,

in ways no one can comprehend.

Yet,

we are all suppose to understand.

Manipulating minds,

with hearts of ice guide us through,

the doorway of the new dawn.

Rest our fate,

upon shoulders that are weak.

Weakened by,

the very soul that they are.

The acid from within,

has made them brittle men.

Something is bound to fail,

as another dream reaches mother earth's soil.

It hits,

with a silent sound.

A sound so silent,

that apparently you are the only one,

who has felt it.

For the hearts of ice,

do not bleed compashion,

they bleed for greed and for well being,

that is all to their own.

The box has just been opened,

so many things have yet to become.

-John W. Hedglin- www.johnspoetry.com

Dopey Dope

Moderator

Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

1 posted 2000-11-12 05:09 PM

I liked this a lot. The format and style was kick butt.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!

Yankee10n20BFF
Junior Member

since 2000-11-02

Posts 27
T-Town, AL

2 posted 2000-11-12 05:27 PM

I agree with dopey on this one. It was great!

No matter what you are going through, all you have to do is close your eyes and dream cause no one can take them away from you.

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

3 posted 2000-11-12 06:52 PM

I liked this also.. a hint?  Watch the spelling.
But I will add that it needn't be the way you have described here we do have the power to make the conscience effort to change, to focus again on the light and keep trying..  Without hope, faith and love we have nothing...
Good stuff

Isis

*I believe every time you put your words to paper, you change. Each feeling is set free, and you may follow.....*
~Isis~~Sovereign of the Spirit.

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