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firecrakker
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since 2000-10-20
Posts 235
Virginia

0 posted 2000-11-11 02:23 PM


Hand in hand...
   We've walked this road of life, both joy and pain
   Sharing laughter in the sun
   and tears that fell as rain
Hand in hand...
   You've drawn me near your gentle basking hearth
   Enfolded me in silken arms
   your love, my only warmth
Hand in hand..
   I've caught my breath, lost in ebony orbs
   Aching, longing, mirrored, there
   At passion found, once more
Hand in hand..
   You've shared my pain,as life brought life again
   Humbling me with your cries of joy
   for the miracles we had made
Hand in hand..
   I'll walk with you, as seasons turn us gray
   until our hands must finally part
   to join again, someday
  
  
  Sheila 11/11/00
  

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Life is a journey.. not a destination..  - unknown


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catalinamoon
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Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone
1 posted 2000-11-11 11:00 PM


Hi, this is perfectly beautiful. Loved it.
Sandra

firejerm
Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 217
Springfield, OH, good ol USA
2 posted 2000-11-12 09:54 PM


Makes me wonder, especially the ebony orbs thing...



Jeremy


"Those little slices of death, how I loathe them."
-Edgar Allen Poe

just_another_fe
Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 483
MICHIGAN
3 posted 2000-11-12 11:57 PM


THAT WAS BEAUTI-FUL   GOOD JOB

Don't fear failure so
much that you refuse to
try new things. The
saddest summary of a
life contains three
descriptions:
could have,
might h

Dark_kisses_Within
Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680
Kansas
5 posted 2000-11-13 12:47 PM


EXCELLENT!! Oh man I could feel the love!  Great job  

DkW


No person is worth your tears, and the only one that is ...... will never make you cry


EagleOne
Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829
Between a laugh and a tear...
6 posted 2000-11-14 05:43 AM


Yeah! I like this one too.  

"The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest"
~ My Angel.

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