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Click
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since 2000-06-11
Posts 202
USA

0 posted 2000-11-10 11:15 PM




I don't want love to die,
I just want my friend.
I don't want to live forever,
but then again....


Click



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Cerenity
Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637
Escondido-California
1 posted 2000-11-11 01:16 AM


Hi Click,

WOW you've just said so very very much in such a small group of words, this belongs in front of the world were everybody can see it, WOW again, awesome job.

Love, Cerenity


"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)



taramw
Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738

2 posted 2000-11-11 03:53 AM


but then again...

Nicely written  

~ Tara ~


"A poem should not mean, but be" - Archibald MacLeish

Suzanne Arlene
Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 377
Ontario, Canada
3 posted 2000-11-11 07:41 AM


you sure have a way of makin poems that make you think
very good Suzanne

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