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Suzanne Arlene
Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 377
Ontario, Canada

0 posted 2000-11-10 09:49 PM


Let me bring my heart and park it
in front of your house in the morning.
Under a tree it can silently wait
for the day
near you,
Until you give it life.

Let me take your pain and drive it
to the edge of the Palisades in the morning.
With eternal glee,give it one good push
let it beg
let it scream.
And let it be gone.

Let me grasp your shell and melt it
down to the core in the morning.
Leaving only the sweetest part
your heart
dearest heart
To be given to me.

Let me take your fear and wash it
away with the tide in the morning.
Creating for us a brave new world
come to me
I'll run to you
Overflowing with love.

Let me hold your face and kiss it
tenderly,my love,each morning.
Love me,dear,and hold me close
lean on me
feel my love
Until the end of time.


© Copyright 2000 Suzanne Arlene - All Rights Reserved
catalinamoon
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone
1 posted 2000-11-11 11:04 PM


SIGH....
Such love, to have it, to hold it forever. And the metaphors you used here are very creative.
Great writing.
Sandra

firejerm
Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 217
Springfield, OH, good ol USA
2 posted 2000-11-12 09:57 PM


Oh man, why can't every guy find a woman like this?  Though a tad choppy it wasn't hard to follow at all.  I enjoyed this greatly.  

Jeremy

"Those little slices of death, how I loathe them."
-Edgar Allen Poe

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2000-11-13 04:01 AM


I must say I loved reading this poem...James
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