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Loving from a Distance.... |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas 
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Loving someone from a distance Is so painful at the end All you want is to touch their cheek And walk with them in the wind Touch their hand And hold on tight Laugh with them And smile at night Share with them Your fantasies Look in their eyes And see only me Feel their heart And all the pain Share your hopes And all that gains Snuggle with them As you lay in bed Believe in them And all thats said Share their life And all the dreams Hold them tight When they only scream Loving someone distance Is so painful at the end Hugs and kisses , my love .........To you I send Better?  No person is worth your tears, and the only one that is ...... will never make you cry |
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Suzanne Arlene Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 377Ontario, Canada |
i liked the style you used. short but direct very nice Suzanne |
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Jonas Senior Member
since 2000-03-03
Posts 796Oregon |
Love from a distance is difficult and you expressed the feelings beautifully.  |
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firejerm Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 217Springfield, OH, good ol USA |
Umm, MUCH!  to youJeremy ps. THANK YOU "Those little slices of death, how I loathe them." -Edgar Allen Poe |
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Jesse Jaymz Senior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 708Youngstown, ohio |
hun *hugs* i know how this is. i truly do. the only one that i love is 500 miles away. and married none the less. *sigh* this one touched my heart. great work. love ya jesse Once upon a time there was a light in my life, now theres only love in the dark, There's nothing I can do, a total eclipse of the heart. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Exactly Dark Kisses...I like my hugs and kisses up close...don't want to kiss thru the phone line and hug my pillow...James |
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Verve Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 348Singapore |
The pain you have described so aptly here is really heart-wrenching... Great work! ~Verve |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
DKW, heartwrenching poem. But very well written. write on Kethry Why do yesterdays remain and todays pass by ...unnoticed? Rex E. Alford |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Yeah! It sure can be tough. "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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