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Dark_kisses_Within
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since 2000-03-21
Posts 680
Kansas

0 posted 2000-11-07 11:57 AM


Watching you from the darkened shadows
Not even knowing I am there
Following you down the empty streets
Slaying your body so bare
Wanting to take your blood
Knowing you want it too
I am here to stop your pain
Longing for the flesh of you
Breathing your scent in deeply
Dreaming of your taste
Knowing this is the day
Dont let it go to waste
Sacrificing yourself
Is the greatest gift to me
You have allowed me to live
And to once again be free



No person is worth your tears, and the only one that is ...... will never make you cry


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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico
1 posted 2000-11-08 12:41 PM


Vampires are always good....
Great poem!



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!


catalinamoon
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone
2 posted 2000-11-09 10:30 PM


So many things behind this, besides the obvious, I think. I always like the vampire theme,too. Hope you are doing ok.
Sandra

firecrakker
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since 2000-10-20
Posts 235
Virginia
3 posted 2000-11-10 04:18 PM


I agree with catalina... I have enjoyed the different depths that can be found here...and have experienced them, as well!   *well, not the vampire context..

Great work, as always.

Sheila

firejerm
Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 217
Springfield, OH, good ol USA
4 posted 2000-11-10 05:36 PM


OH HELL YES!

lol
Jeremy

"Those little slices of death, how I loathe them."
-Edgar Allen Poe

Click
Member
since 2000-06-11
Posts 202
USA
5 posted 2000-11-10 11:26 PM


Wow!! Put together so nicely....and so dark.  good read!  Had to read twice,so far....
  thanx.

Click



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