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kynder
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since 2000-04-11
Posts 537
Tallahassee, Florida

0 posted 2000-11-06 09:11 PM



Bring it to me
Put it in my hand
Give me the power
And watch as it flowers
I fear it not
Tasting the challenge
When I think
Giving you your brink
Asking to drink
Daring to stand
Venture in forbidden land
Valleys at my feet
Blooms of demands
Hissed through clenched teeth
Fits like a glove
Sweet bizarre this love


*****kynder

"Full is not heavy as
empty, not nearly, my love,
not nearly...."

Fiona Apple

© Copyright 2000 Kynder - All Rights Reserved
catalinamoon
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone
1 posted 2000-11-06 10:28 PM


Ooh, very interesting, I like this, has a demanding sound, yet almost romantic, in an unfulfilled kind of way.
Peace
Sandra

Ron K. Fox
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since 2000-10-24
Posts 925

2 posted 2000-11-06 10:37 PM


this is a bookend to xenox's poem...you guys must be along the same wave length...cool piece...message is up front

Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox



Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico
3 posted 2000-11-06 11:47 PM


Wonderful......i liked it very  much



"I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust."

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!

Severn
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704

4 posted 2000-11-07 04:22 AM


Love - tis an odd thing.
And it's funny - it does hold its own curious power doesn't it?

Good work here...

K

The wind shifts like this:
Like a human without illusions...
This is how the wind shifts:
Like a human, heavy and heavy,
Who does not care.

W.S

Jannel
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 492
Muncie, IN, USA
5 posted 2000-11-07 10:28 AM


i really liked this. it was mysterious and enchanting.

jann elizabeth

If you can feel that staying human is worthwhile, even when it can't have any result whatever, you've beaten them.
-1984


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