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firejerm
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since 2000-06-13
Posts 217
Springfield, OH, good ol USA

0 posted 2000-11-06 03:24 AM


I would chase a rainbow
And give you its gold
Be the blanket that warms you
When you are cold.
I would make you my fairytale
My "happily ever after"
I'd share my dreams
And surrender my laughter.
I'd get lost in your eyes
Bewildered by your touch
To tell you every day
That I love you so much.
Share with you my sunsets
And the sea gulls cry
Absolutely fascinated
That you are mine.
As the waves kissed the shore
I would kiss you true
Whisper in your ear
How much I love you.
If I chose another dream
It means you have gone
I never want us
To go that wrong.
My inspiration you are
And my fantasy
This is what I'd do for you
If you were with me.

Jeremy T. Sellers by request of Dark_Kisses

11/6/00
3:18 AM


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"Those little slices of death, how I loathe them."
-Edgar Allen Poe


[This message has been edited by firejerm (edited 11-06-2000).]

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Dark_kisses_Within
Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680
Kansas
1 posted 2000-11-06 03:39 AM


You write so beautifully.  You make the real world seem like a fairy tale.  Wish it was like this!

DkW


No person is worth your tears, and the only one that is ...... will never make you cry


jwesley
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563
Spring, Texas
2 posted 2000-11-06 12:40 PM


Sounds like paradise found to me. Well written. Could see/feel it all.


jwesley

Dark_kisses_Within
Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680
Kansas
3 posted 2000-11-06 03:44 PM


Okay Okay I had to stop by and read this once more.  Its a piece that makes me smile  

Thanx Jeremy

DkW


No person is worth your tears, and the only one that is ...... will never make you cry


Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico
4 posted 2000-11-06 11:53 PM


A wonderful post. I liked this very very much!



"I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust."

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!

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