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Dark_kisses_Within
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since 2000-03-21
Posts 680
Kansas

0 posted 2000-11-06 03:05 AM


I would pick you a rose
Each and every day
Tell you I love you
In so many ways
Stand beside you
No matter where you are
Make many wishes
As I gazed upon the stars
Hold your hand tightly
When life had you down
Give you a smile
When you only could frown
Holding you tight
As you cried many tears
Kissing you softly
Chasing away your fears

to be continued......


No person is worth your tears, and the only one that is ...... will never make you cry


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jwesley
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563
Spring, Texas
1 posted 2000-11-06 12:46 PM


Well, I read these backwards...3 to 1 and kinda glad I did as this is my favorite. Lovely work here DKW...enjoyed it much.


jwesley

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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico
2 posted 2000-11-06 11:49 PM


This is great........i aswell read it backwards, but liked this more too!



"I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust."

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!

Severn
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704

3 posted 2000-11-07 08:26 PM


Nice thoughts...

Stand beside you
No matter where you are

I like the idea of this...the idea of a bond extending beyond physical presence. That's cool!

K

The wind shifts like this:
Like a human without illusions...
This is how the wind shifts:
Like a human, heavy and heavy,
Who does not care.

W.S

Ron K. Fox
Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925

4 posted 2000-11-07 08:42 PM


This speaks of the true commitment of love...to be there always, whether near or far. lovely pen. Ron

Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox



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