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Ron K. Fox
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since 2000-10-24
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0 posted 2000-11-05 07:16 PM


Questions.
Questions.
Questions that birth thoughts.
Thoughts that weigh upon me this night
Amidst a silence of shadows
A gavel ‘s beat plays within my mind
My hands cradle the anvil
Eyes closed to quiet the thoughts that shout
To no avail
Thoughts that question me with scrutiny
The gavel beats
Demanding a reply
Now
Now
Now
But I cannot respond to  that which I cannot validate
There is no alibi to seek haven within
My response in defense will not warrant my actions
I can only plea forgiveness to myself
And ask for recess from myself
No quarter.
No mercy.
Answers are awaited
The hammering echoes
Now
Now
Now
The jury all has been created in my image
Peers all.
They all mirror the judgment I have long awaited
Somber eyes reflect the weight
Judgment will set me free, sink the anvil
Deep within the muck of lies
As I pen my verdict with blood ink of my soul
Heavy the weight drags upon me
Heavy is the anvil
Pounded and hammered
The judge seated high, awaits uneasy
His gavel a blur of impatient
Now
Now
Now
Hands tied by deceit
I break beneath the lone light blinding me
I answer.
I am the judge
I am the jury
I stand at trial
I read the verdict.
Insanity.


Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox


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1 posted 2000-11-06 12:59 PM


Wow, i thought this was great. The ending is what made the biggest impact upon the whole poem for me. Great job!



"I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust."

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