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Jonas
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since 2000-03-03
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Oregon

0 posted 2000-11-03 10:59 AM



Accidental mental lapse,
caused by the rebirth
of reluctant convictions,
and my stomach lurches
with the sickening drop
of necessary acceptance;
a one way ticket
on the neuron express,
straight down.

11/2/00


© Copyright 2000 Gary - All Rights Reserved
Ron K. Fox
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since 2000-10-24
Posts 925

1 posted 2000-11-03 10:38 PM


this is rockin'. very good. felt the drop all the way        
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Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox



[This message has been edited by Ron K. Fox (edited 11-03-2000).]

Christopher
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Purgatorial Incarceration
2 posted 2000-11-04 12:50 PM


So you've met my ex-wife too!
Dopey Dope
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3 posted 2000-11-04 12:54 PM


hahaha chistopher is funny.
Anyway i think the poem rocks. Keep it up!



"I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust."

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!

Jonas
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since 2000-03-03
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Oregon
4 posted 2000-11-05 08:49 PM


Thanks Ron. Glad you enjoyed!

Christopher - ROFL!

Dopey, my thanks to you for reading  

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