»
Archives
»
Dark Poetry #2
»
No surprise
| Dark Poetry #2 |
|
No surprise |
|
|
LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Love equals pain. Why do I keep on solving this equation? I've got it figured out And still I work with more determination... I'm sure it is correct And though this answer I despise, If next attempt will bring the same resolt I know it wouldn't catch me by surprise... "Most girls want a man with the mean green Don't wanna dance if he can't be Everything that I dream up A man that understands real love" |
||
| © Copyright 2000 LM - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
Jesse Jaymz Senior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 708Youngstown, ohio |
awwwwwwww hun *hugs* i feel your pain hun. seems to be the same way for me too. dont ya just wish you could find that perfect man?? well woman for me. =) alot of people say that i am very sweet and stuff like that yet i always get broken. =( great writing hun. e-mail me =) psycho-chicken@juno.com would love to hear from you and talk =) love ya jesse Once upon a time there was a light in my life, now theres only love in the dark, There's nothing I can do, a total eclipse of the heart. |
||
catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Yeah, isn't it sad that this is true? Good point made. Sandra |
||
|
Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
great work. I loved this cute little poem.  Ronil (The sweet sound of summer sends serenity through my soul searching for that evermore solitude.) |
||
|
Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
Awwww GREAT lil poem. But I dont think all love equals pain.... just all the ones in MY life do!! lol  But the right one is out there. HEY... if I can have hope than I know you can!  Nicely written, DkW No person is worth your tears, and the only one that is ...... will never make you cry |
||
|
firejerm Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 217Springfield, OH, good ol USA |
We are on a constant search aren't we? We come here and write our pains and sorrows...I'm beginning to wonder if we ever find "it". However you're right, we get back on the bike and ride again Good work Jeremy "Those little slices of death, how I loathe them." -Edgar Allen Poe |
||
|
firecrakker Member
since 2000-10-20
Posts 235Virginia |
So true, on all counts . But the pleasure found in the processing is sometimes worth that end result. Sheila |
||
|
Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
1heart+1heart=love. just need to find the right 1 Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox |
||
|
nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
you know how they say sometimes "it hurts so good"...well without pain I guess we wouldn't know those feelings of love and healing.huggz ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
||
|
LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Thanks a lot everybody for stopping by and replying, I really appreciate it! Take Care! |
||
|
Dopey Dope
Moderator
Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Hey this was great. I tend to disagree with the fact that love brings pain. I think that the lack of love or unrequited love brings pain. The shear contradiction of love is what brings pain. In fact, the contradiction of love doesn't bring pain.....it IS pain. there's my 3 cents of knowledge.  "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
