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When I think of You (please read this is important to me) (a letter)
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When I think of You (please read this is important to me) (a letter) |
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Allysa 
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden 
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When I think of you I see a face. Smiling back at me. This is the way I choose to remember you always. Not with tears in your eyes or you pleading for your life. But when i last saw you smiling, as you always did. When I think of you in heaven I think of what HE did. Of how he will have to suffer and have to live with the guilt day after day. And I want him to suffer. he took your life away. When I think of how you loved Alex I think of how I love Justin. It's not just a little crush there is something more. When I think of you, I see an angel, standing at heaven's door. waiting to see us and laugh when we grow old. In the presence of the angels where it is never cold. When I think of you I see a world without any tears. where you don't have to worry, there are no fears. When I think of you I see you the way you always were. An angel, on earth, but in heaven now. Jesica, you are an angel, and we love you. Don't wander throught this glassy surface, expecting to find more than me, because what I am without a purpose, but a lone mirage to see. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Beautiful words for an angel...James |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Sad, and touching. Greatly expressive. Take care. Sandra |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Allysa~ This was an amazing tribute to your friend. Not only is she an angel but she is your angel. Watching down on you, making sure you are doing what you should! ~*Love is sometimes like a rose. Beautiful in the beginning but dies in the end.*~ |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Hon this is beautiful a real tribute to your dear friend. And I too agree she is up their watching over you - your own guardian angel. *hugs* Isis *I believe every time you put your words to paper, you change. Each feeling is set free, and you may follow.....* ~Isis~~Sovereign of the Spirit. |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
This is a beautiful tribute to your angel, your friend. Be well. Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox |
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Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
thanks for replying. ya all make me feel better. |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
And Jesica hears your heartfelt tribute I am sure  Very touching, Allysa. ~HUGS~< !signature--> ...chanson~ Music, tonal clear & pure, Caresses the harshest of curves. ---Song of Gesture [This message has been edited by chansondegeste (edited 11-02-2000).] |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
What a wonderful way to remember a friend. She is up there really feeling special, knowing that she hasn't been forgotten. And that she's being remembered in such a special way. Keep it up my friend.  I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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firejerm Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 217Springfield, OH, good ol USA |
Oh wow, this is very touching. I just sat here and stared at the screen for a while after reading this. Life is fragile, and can be very sudden. Makes me believe that angels aren't nec. in heaven, but right here on earth. "Those little slices of death, how I loathe them." -Edgar Allen Poe |
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Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
I write poems for Jesica so that she won't think that we are forgetting her. I made a promise to myself and to her to never let anyone forget her, and I intend on keeping that. She was my friend. I wasn't her best friend, but she was my friend. Don't wander throught this glassy surface, expecting to find more than me, because what I am without a purpose, but a lone mirage to see. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
a great tribute to your friend......i hope all works out and things stay fine. Keep it up allysa......you know you rock.  "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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carolinadreams Member
since 2000-07-20
Posts 142 |
maybe the last woderful thing may be what hurts the most maybe you've ignored the train you may be one cleared allowed to be stricken damn the pain within the rust may come the stinging have we lost something we could have try as you will, please don't fight can we just be tonight |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
Awe this is soo sweet & sad & it brought tears to my eyes becuz i know how this feels great work LOVE ELMO |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Allysa, This is a beautiful tribute to your friend and you are keeping your promise to her and much more by telling the world of her beauty as an angel for ever more, thank you for sharing. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
You guys make me feel so special! Thanks! Morning rain fell on my window, and I can't see at all. Even if I could it would all be gray, put your picture on my wall, it reminds me that it's not |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Beautiful tribute, my friend. I'm sure she's smiling now. jwesley |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Hello Allysa, *HuGS* great poem, very special. Kethry. Growth demands a temporary surrender of security. Gail Sheehy |
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Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
thanks you guys, ya all are so nice to me! Morning rain fell on my window, and I can't see at all. Even if I could it would all be gray, put your picture on my wall, it reminds me that it's not |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
That's so cool that you're keeping her alive through your words, this poem is awesome. She must be watching over you and missing you too. Again, awesome poem! "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! http://www.thehungersite.com |
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breedlove Esq New Member
since 2000-11-02
Posts 4 |
Feelings are the flowers of the soul, this was a special arrangement. Yesterday was easy. |
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greentwin New Member
since 2000-11-09
Posts 4 |
what special tribute to a friend |
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