Sven...When Tears Won't Listen

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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2000-10-31 10:42 PM

When Tears Won't Listen...for Sven

Often times in memories hold,
The flow begins it's reign.
The stars begin to fall from grace,
As teardrops on cheeks stain.

The night sky in it's silent state,
Bemoans for burst of light,
When come the morn with sunshine's rays,
To blanket dark of night.

Upon the dew of each new day,
I trust no tears will fall.
Yet sometimes even without cause,
They hear a heartened call.

And even though I wish to pause,
Removing any doubt,
These tears won't listen when my heart,
In loving words, cries out.

~Wynter Bliss
*thank you for the inspiring title words

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".

...Pope John Paul II

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

1 posted 2000-10-31 10:56 PM

Beautiful writing here hon, I'm sure Sven will love it!!

isis

*I believe every time you put your words to paper, you change. Each feeling is set free, and you may follow.....*
~Isis~~Sovereign of the Spirit.

Ron K. Fox
Senior Member

since 2000-10-24

Posts 925

2 posted 2000-10-31 11:08 PM

A great inspiration from a great guy. beautiful work.

Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox

Sven

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since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

3 posted 2000-10-31 11:10 PM

Thank you Wynter. . . this is wonderful. . .

I'm honored that I was able to inspire you. . .

Thank you again my friend. . .

--------------------------------------------------------

That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

4 posted 2000-10-31 11:27 PM

Love this, Wynter. And Sven is a great inspiration to us all, hm?
Why won't the tears listen, anyway?
Sandra

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

5 posted 2000-11-01 06:41 AM

Isis-Thank you, I enjoyed his line and it was so soft and perfect to ispire me after a day of uncontrollable tears myself.

Ron- inspiration comes easy to one who reads such wonderful words on here. Thank you Ron...you will be next.

~Wynter Bliss

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".

...Pope John Paul II

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

6 posted 2000-11-01 06:43 AM

Sven- your words inspire many, and it is I that is greatful for the chance to"use" them.
huggz my new friend.

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".

...Pope John Paul II

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

7 posted 2000-11-01 06:47 AM

Sandra- I believe I am going through something similar to you, maybe a little more permanent and with a lot more negative consequences to it. And I also know how those tears won't listen when they begin to flow and the mind won't shut out the hurt and pain. It is a roller coaster ride we are on at the moment and I, too, want to get off, if only someone could stop it. Hope this wasn't being too personal. huggz and a big Thank you for your visit.
sending you
~Wynter's warmth

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".

...Pope John Paul II

LM
Senior Member

since 2000-08-03

Posts 585

8 posted 2000-11-04 01:06 PM

This is so beautifull, I'm glad I found it.
It really is an inspiring phrase.
Take Care!

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

9 posted 2000-11-04 06:20 PM

Thank you LM, I appreciate your visit and kind words

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

10 posted 2000-11-05 01:39 AM

HOLY!
This was amazing. I thought it was great. I can't believe you write so well.

"I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust."

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

11 posted 2000-11-05 07:22 AM

D_D, your expressions bring a huge smile to my face...always. Thank you

~Wynter< !signature-->

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 11-05-2000).]

Cerenity
Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 2637
Escondido-California

12 posted 2000-11-05 10:52 AM

Hi Wynters Bliss,

This is awesome so very beautiful, you have much talent, and I know Sven loved it. Man I just loved this one thank you.

Love, Cerenity

"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

13 posted 2000-11-05 11:20 AM

Cerenity, your words always please me. Thank you, huggz.

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

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