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Dark Poetry #2

layer upon layer upon layer

Ron K. Fox
Senior Member

since 2000-10-24

Posts 925

0 posted 2000-10-31 05:33 PM

Layer upon layer upon layer
Stacking
Lies
Black upon black upon black
Desolate
Emptiness
Darkness enveloping the darkness of darkness
Barren
Hopelessness
Pieces among pieces of pieces
Shattered
Shards
Tears drowning tears drowning tears
Alone
Loveless

Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

1 posted 2000-10-31 11:39 PM

Ron, are you peeking in my window again??
You sure do know how to say it!
Sandra

Severn
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-17

Posts 7704

2 posted 2000-11-01 03:42 PM

Wow - melodramatic in some ways - yet I felt this way for about half an hour a few days ago. Now, I think it's the emptiness that is the worst part, and remains. There is a safety in that darkness though.

Well done Ron.

K< !signature-->

The wind shifts like this:
Like a human without illusions...
This is how the wind shifts:
Like a human, heavy and heavy,
Who does not care.

W.S.

[This message has been edited by Severn (edited 11-01-2000).]

Ron K. Fox
Senior Member

since 2000-10-24

Posts 925

3 posted 2000-11-02 12:26 PM

Thanks for stopping by...was just one of those moods, you know?

Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox

firecrakker
Member

since 2000-10-20

Posts 235
Virginia

4 posted 2000-11-03 11:10 AM

I think there are many that feel this desolation time and again.. You've expressed this feeling so completely, without the complication of meaningless words... Great job!

Sheila

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

5 posted 2000-11-03 12:19 PM

Interesting patter...especially if read aloud...well done Sir...

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ

stoned'
Junior Member

since 2000-10-23

Posts 14

6 posted 2000-11-03 01:28 PM

Wow ..Gwork..really different.very unique!

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

7 posted 2000-11-03 03:02 PM

yes this is my mood today also...huggz Ron...will that help?

~Wynter... sending some warmth to you today.

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".

...Pope John Paul II

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