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Victoria
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0 posted 2000-10-31 02:49 PM


Can you feel the spell i have woven around you?
under the blood moon rising in the night
can you see the moon..of crimson hue?
bleeding a waterfall of moonlight

Within the mask of my web i patiently wait
in the silken bindings of our abyss
i watch you drink of black widows potion
craving the wickedness of my kiss

I will wait until you are in my trance
feel long nails clawing down your  back
As long lashes perform a ritual dance
not aware of my surprise attack

Behind my dark mask of silken sheen
hides this Wicked Witch of Halloween
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A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)  





[This message has been edited by Victoria (edited 11-01-2000).]

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nakdthoughts
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1 posted 2000-10-31 03:01 PM


Within the mask of my web i wait patiently
in the silken bindings of our abyss
i watch you drink of black widows potion
craving the wickedness of my kiss

Love It!! From this hallowed night
I thank you, ~Wynter Bliss.  

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".

...Pope John Paul II


Victoria
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2 posted 2000-10-31 04:27 PM


thank you NT.. from the Wicked Witch of the West ha..

           ~Victoria~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)


Ron K. Fox
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3 posted 2000-10-31 05:47 PM


What a dark poem for a night as dark as this.The web grows tighter. Enjoyed it!

Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox

Victoria
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4 posted 2000-10-31 10:00 PM


thank you Ron..it is a cold rainy night here..i hope all the children had some indoor parties to go to..hope they got an early start before it started raining..

Let me loosen that web now ha...

                     ~Victoria~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)


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The Shores of Alone
5 posted 2000-10-31 11:29 PM


Go get him, girl! Whew, the guy never had a chance.  
Love this. Your attitude inspires me.
Sandra

Victoria
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6 posted 2000-11-01 10:46 AM


haa ..thanks Sandra..you may borrow my web ha..

                     ~Victoria~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)


Professor Gloom
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of Depression
7 posted 2000-11-01 02:33 PM


I enjoyed your poem,
very bewitching.

Gloom

Victoria
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8 posted 2000-11-01 04:47 PM


Thank you Professor..so glad you enjoyed..

                 ~Victoria~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)


LM
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9 posted 2000-11-01 04:58 PM


Hehe... so that's the way to do it!!!  
Magnificent piece!!!
Take Care!

Victoria
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10 posted 2000-11-01 06:52 PM


now you know my secret ha..thanks LM..

                  ~Victoria~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)


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