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jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

0 posted 2000-10-31 11:40 AM

I Lost The Dream

I lost the dream
the other day
just as the sun
fell from the sky.
I lost my way
on the only path
that connected
you and I.
I fell down twice
and got up once,
that's when I started to cry,
oh God I screamed
and screamed again,
why did she have to die.

w. james beard, jr.

...not for me, but another.

Christopher

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-02

Posts 8296
Purgatorial Incarceration

1 posted 2000-10-31 02:27 PM

ouch

C

Ron K. Fox
Senior Member

since 2000-10-24

Posts 925

2 posted 2000-10-31 05:51 PM

I fell down twice
and got up once,

Glad it wasn't you...but I definetly felt it.

Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2000-11-01 04:28 AM

Excellent writing...James

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

4 posted 2000-11-01 06:22 PM

Wow, very powerful.
Sandra

Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

5 posted 2000-11-02 01:23 AM

great ending. You took me my surprise.

Ronil (The sweet sound of summer sends serenity through my soul searching for that evermore solitude.)

taramw
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 738

6 posted 2000-11-02 05:14 AM

Very touching... the end really got me.
~ Tara ~

"A poem should not mean, but be" - Archibald MacLeish

firecrakker
Member

since 2000-10-20

Posts 235
Virginia

7 posted 2000-11-03 11:12 AM

Wow.... I have to agree with catalina..very powerful!

Sheila

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

8 posted 2000-11-04 06:15 AM

strong writing, James...deeply felt

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

Dopey Dope

Moderator

Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

9 posted 2000-11-05 12:56 PM

*tear*

Very sad....Very Very Very sad......

"I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust."

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!

just_another_fe
Member

since 2000-02-05

Posts 483
MICHIGAN

10 posted 2000-11-06 01:10 AM

BRAVO BRAVO

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