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Dark_kisses_Within
Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680
Kansas

0 posted 2000-10-30 10:03 AM


*Drip* Drip* Drip*
I look around to see
What is making this noise
Oh what could it be
*Drip* Drip* Drip*
The moon is full tonight
But this noise is overbearing
Yet there is nothing in my sight
*Drip* Drip* Drip*
I cover up my ears
I do not want to hear it
For it adds to all my fears
*Drip* Drip* Drip*
I begin to look around
I must find the reason
Of this horrible sound
*Drip* Drip* Drip*
I feel something warm
Oozing down my chest
As it begins to storm
*Drip* Drip* Drip*
I look down to see
A bloody knife on the ground
Laying next to me
*Drip* Drip* Drip*
I gasp in frightning tear
Who could have done this
Didnt they even care
*Drip* Drip* Drip*


Hmmmmm not too sure where this one came from!  A little odd I know!  


No person is worth your tears, and the only one that is ...... will never make you cry


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Ron K. Fox
Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925

1 posted 2000-10-30 10:48 AM


You're scaring me girl. get those notions outta that head...or maybe it's just this spooky time of year, hope so...creepy poem...but good.

Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox

firejerm
Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 217
Springfield, OH, good ol USA
2 posted 2000-10-30 11:25 AM


*looks over his shoulder*  Shwew, what a way for me to wake up this morning  

Jeremy

"Those little slices of death, how I loathe them."
-Edgar Allen Poe

Dark_kisses_Within
Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680
Kansas
3 posted 2000-10-30 11:37 AM


Okay Okay Ron & Jeremy.. I said this was a little odd.... ummm okay ALOT odd!    Sometimes this **** just flows outta my head!  S-P-O-O-K-Y !!!!  hehe

Thanx anyways guys  
DkW


No person is worth your tears, and the only one that is ...... will never make you cry


EagleOne
Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829
Between a laugh and a tear...
4 posted 2000-10-31 02:11 AM


I like the way you have put this together, certainly different though!

"The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest"
~ My Angel.

jwesley
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563
Spring, Texas
5 posted 2000-10-31 10:42 AM


When I awoke this morning, I wanted to laugh but had nothing to laugh about.  Instead I keyed up the Internet/Passions/You, and LO!
Laugh I did!

Thanks my friend...I needed that. Not quite
an "inspirational" piece, but I really enjoyed the read. It's fun to come from wierd
corners sometimes, isn't it?

walk easy...

jwesley

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