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when i was with you
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when i was with you |
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just_another_fe Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 483MICHIGAN 
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When I was with you nothing mattered to me I was as happy as I could be, nothing any girl said could have phased me. There was a permanent smile on my face, one that NOTHING could erase. A filled whole in my heart, one that NO ONE else could replace. I use to always say when I get you I'll never let go, but you can only squeeze so tight before the blood don't flow. you didn't even give me a choice you just walked away. I didn't even get a chance to make you wanna stay. Told me you would be back. Someday. The way things look now that "someday" will never come my way. Don't fear failure so much that you refuse to try new things. The saddest summary of a life contains three descriptions: could have, might have, and should have. --Louis Boone |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
quote: VERY good analogy here - and oh so true. I think sometimes it's hard to realize that - therefore the saying: "If you love someone, let them go..." Well told, and I must say an attractive format for this piece! Christopher |
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firejerm Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 217Springfield, OH, good ol USA |
One word, OUCH!  This was good, and reach out, we've been there before!  Take it easy, Jeremy "Those little slices of death, how I loathe them." -Edgar Allen Poe |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
Ohhh... this poem is sooo full! Of a lot of things! Take care ~ Tara ~ "A poem should not mean, but be" - Archibald MacLeish |
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