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Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

0 posted 2000-10-29 07:55 PM


To be inspired,
To have a reason to get out of bed each day,
To see the world through rose coloured glasses,
Seeing everyday things in a different way.

The music sounds so much clearer,
You hear the trills and minor notes,
As though they are a language unto themselves,
My soul is lifted by a tune a master wrote.

Looking into a single lit candle,
The light of all the light,
To feel your presence even when I'm alone,
My shelter on a dark and lonely night.

Seeing the majesty of the night time sky,
Knowing you see it too,
Together yet alone we watch nature's spectacle,
And in it we see the love between we two.

My soul is lighter,
Joyously uplifted,
This is why I was born,
No more feeling the drifter...

You inspire me my muse,
Give me beautiful dreams to share,
Poetically and musically,
For you reminded me how to care.

You alone have inspired me,
To be the better person I've become,
For you alone reminded me,
I have so much to share with everyone.

A man who so inspires,
Me in every way,
Deserves so much himself,
Each and everyday.

You can lead the world to peace,
Part the seas with a mere wave of a hand,
Your love and enthusiasm for life and love,
Could bring sunshine to say many lands.

And I will always be thankful,
You saw so much in me,
And I can live my life,
The way it's meant to be.

Though we may never be together,
We will never be apart,
Just like our names are joined in conversation,
They'll be joined for all eternity - deep within our hearts......


*I believe every time you put your words to paper, you change. Each feeling is set free, and you may follow.....*
~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Sp

© Copyright 2000 Isis - All Rights Reserved
Sven
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Posts 14937
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1 posted 2000-10-29 08:03 PM


Wonderful my friend. . . just wonderful. . . so nice to see that you have a reason for being. . . a reason to be inspired. . . we all need that. . .

HUGS

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


Ron K. Fox
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since 2000-10-24
Posts 925

2 posted 2000-10-29 08:29 PM


Now you're sounding more like the person you truly are...words heal also...told ya.< !signature-->

Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox


[This message has been edited by Ron K. Fox (edited 10-29-2000).]

Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
3 posted 2000-10-29 09:31 PM


*group hug*  I'm not ashamed to admit it  - I like wisdomish men that inspire me.  So shoot me already LOL
Thanks
Isis

*I believe every time you put your words to paper, you change. Each feeling is set free, and you may follow.....*
~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Sp

Ron K. Fox
Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925

4 posted 2000-10-30 12:46 PM


You have a poem in open 10...hope you like it. Thank you for the inspiration.

Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox

Sven
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5 posted 2000-10-30 08:35 PM


Well, I like to be inspired by Goddesses myself. . .  

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


Ron K. Fox
Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925

6 posted 2000-10-30 09:05 PM


Duh? (smacking palm to forehead) Of course it would help to tell you the title..."Isis"...what else.

Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox

firecrakker
Member
since 2000-10-20
Posts 235
Virginia
7 posted 2000-10-30 11:25 PM


I know I haven't had the pleasure of reading everything you've written.. but, this is truly a positive change to what I've seen previously... I like this facet of you as well. To love like this, huh?


Sheila (crakker)

jwesley
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563
Spring, Texas
8 posted 2000-10-31 01:09 PM


Isn't it wonderful to feel so good and so wanted.  Lovely piece, my friend...


jwesley

Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
9 posted 2000-10-31 07:52 PM


Thanks everyone!!!  
Ron I'm off to check out the poem in open 10 thanks
Isis

*I believe every time you put your words to paper, you change. Each feeling is set free, and you may follow.....*
~Isis~~Sovereign of the Spirit.

Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
10 posted 2000-10-31 07:52 PM


Thanks everyone!!!  
Ron I'm off to check out the poem in open 10 thanks
Isis

*I believe every time you put your words to paper, you change. Each feeling is set free, and you may follow.....*
~Isis~~Sovereign of the Spirit.

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